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  1. Magical

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    The dark side of life's poetry
    is pleading to be read,
    Gasping breathless through the depths
    of words that must be said.
    When shadows cloud the evening skies
    and mark their hidden choices,
    Emote the words when poets cry
    and listen to their voices.

    The dark side of life's poetry
    can hardly be ignored,
    When written with intensity
    the verses are implored.
    Listen to their voices
    written from the words of pain,
    Ardor the poet's bleeding heart
    as he bears his soul again.


    Posted By Forestdawn | Jul 27, 2015
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    I Love this! I was actually thinking of the dark poetry and stories I had written in the past. I am going to read through some to see what my poetry evolution barometer is so to speak. This piece speaks to me as it gives light and voice to the poetry that is a bit more intense, that is a bit more edgy. This goes deep within the abyss of your poetical well and I am loving it. Thank you for the read!!
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    Thank you so much for your comments. I sit humbled. I'm happy to know you were inspired. It really gave me deep emotions when I wrote it. My inspiration was one of my nephews wrote some dark poetry, that screamed, READ ME. I wish I had some of his work. but he doesn't write anymore.
    Thanks again
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    Posted By Forestdawn | Jul 31, 2015
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