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    soulbrothajames New Member

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    She screamed liberation after her nose piercing uncaged uninhibited
    Subliminal thrusts consciousness extreme awareness of even ubiety
    She said that she is contemplating piercing her tongue next
    “OUCH” yet
    also “Hmmmmmmm, interesting”!!!”
    Freedom movement
    society
    Civil trials
    Dermis responsibility
    Shunned never
    Possible endless miles of
    Theophany activity for ever
    Who knows?
    I wonder how many more piercings
    She gonna end up getting and I wonder where else
    On her body
    Is she gonna get them?

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    MEN!?! :rolleyes:
    LOL - couldn't resist that one.

    Anyway - nice piece - As one who has both nostrils and septum pierced, I got a bit of a giggle out of this one.

    Love this first line! This is EXACTLY how I felt when I got my first piercing. It's on my face - so you can't hide it. I felt liberated indeed, almost as if my inhibitions hid behind the piercing maybe....? It's an interesting concept, this "nose piercing uncaging inhibition" -- I think that's what you mean to say actually ==> change uninhibited to inhibition? IDK - I suppose either would work...

    Whatever the case may be - I enjoyed the read = thanks for sharing it :yes:

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Mar 22, 2011
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