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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by mariahenriques, Oct 25, 2006.



    mariahenriques New Member

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    My heart,
    a lonely machine
    of spirit and blood
    is beating,
    every minute of
    is time
    it's sounding literally.
    In love.



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    Dear Maria,

    :wow: First, I apologize for taking so long to review. I am so glad I found this, as it is amazing. This is simply exquisite, and quite beautiful. I am fond of short verse that leaves me memorized, and this is definitely one of them. I read this several times, and with each time I heard love loud and clear. To think, a heart so resounding is so lonely. Fantabulous write!! Thank you for sharing with us!!! Is that your artwork that compliments the canvas? Ahhh, just visited your website, and yes, wonderful artwork, and congratulations on your art exhibit!!!!!! :bravo:

    {{{{~~**PAINTED**~~}}}:giftrose:

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    thanks!



    Hi Painted!....

    :thankyou:


    ...so much for all your kindness!.....


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    This was lovely, it really was. It made me think of all the times when I look at my husband, and catch myself staring. *hugs* Thank you for sharing.


    Posted By Sealiah | Mar 21, 2007
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    I have no words to say how beatiful yor words are! Totally AWESOME!


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    :wow: Maria! Although this is a short piece it says such volumes, and takes the mind down side roads of delight!! Truly a piece of art...

    it's sounding literally.
    In love.

    I SO love it when the words of others allow me to see a taken-for granted item, like the heart (although well lauded throughout history) in a completely new light and take on new meaning! I would never have thought of a heart "sounding out" a feeling, although it is perfectly correlated!!
    :girllove:
    Amazing and awesome painting! Thanks for sharing....and WELCOME!!! :sign_welcome:

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    Hi Maria!!!!!!! Welcome Back!!!!!! Good to see you, and please don't stay away too long :acute: . Looking forward to seeing more fabulous work from you. ;)2

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    I'm sure glad you found this one MS KIM! I'm really liking it - It's gently flowing sound that compliments that painting so very well.

    Hi MARIA - I enjoyed reading this one - for in its simplicity one can dream of knowing such a simple, complete and satisfying personal love!

    Well done.
    Thanx for sharing!

    Jacquii.

    btw - I was just looking at that painting - it's oddly abstract - but it seems like a bit of paradise. It seems to me the serenity of the doves and the lovers two... It looks like the womanly figure is pulling off a mask, as to be truelove. Interesting... Do you know where the painting comes from?


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    Ms Jacquii........hey check out her website!!! The painting is hers, as she is an artist. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!

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    WOW! What a great site - I didn't even notice the Homepage link :doh: - so thanx for the link MS KIM! AWESOME work MARIA!

    Jacquii.

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