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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Look into my eyes
    Tell me what you see?
    Do you see a broken heart?
    Do you see endless dreams?
    If you look really close
    you will see a ghost living inside of me

    Please don’t look to deep
    I don’t want you do see my past
    Just stare into my eyes
    I really think this is love

    There is a part of me that hides from
    the rest of the world
    It’s a place of lonely desires
    A place no one should know
    A place for a broken heart
    All of this pain just makes me want to end it all

    I’ve known you for a long time
    I want you to be my lover
    I want us to be best friends
    I want love and devotion
    Oh please heal my open wounds

    Look into my eyes and clense
    this dying soul
    And watch this ghost fade away
    As you set me free from this world

    By: Lee-Ann Wolsey
    01/16/2008
    9:28AM

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    WOW.... this is really deep86! Love truly as no limits! Nicely done!

    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Thank you very much for the nice comment CurtisSpiderLee :D

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