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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by JolieH, Apr 23, 2008.



    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Love is Cake

    Iced for a party
    baked by mother
    decorations prepared
    the night before.

    A carousel cake
    pretty horses going round
    carnival music
    from an antique player.

    The monkey is dancing
    children laugh
    to see such a character
    collecting coins.

    Hats are in favor
    cones in all flavors
    whistles
    salute the clergy.

    Grandpa’s are smiling
    Grandmother’s kissing
    pink lipstick
    on her cheeks.


    Posted By JolieH | Apr 23, 2008
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    Tha-Emissary Black Knight!

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    I like the way you layer your images like a cake. I'm guessing the icing on the cake is Granpa kissing Grandma! Oh the dentures of desire you painted! Excellente!!!
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    @Tha-Emissary - dentures of desire?!?!! :roflmao: Sheesh...you just ruined it...those two do not at ALL go together! LOLOLOL!

    Jolie - this is a really love-filled "mixing and baking" of the cake...I agree with Chicken about the lovely layering...very heartwarming.

    Nomad

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