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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by zaac, Sep 6, 2011.



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    Paint my heart in colors

    that find their light in you.

    Breathe into my life

    the tints and hues,

    reflections of love waiting to be made.



    Linger on my skin,

    lips of satin, breath of heaven;

    your hands around my heart;

    molding, kneading, blending

    the melodies I have longed to sing



    Of love hoped for, now found

    in the corners of your smile;

    of the fire in your eyes,;

    of my hands that leave you breathless,

    lost in the scents of love in the making.



    Reach for me, you will find me

    strain to touch me, I am already there

    I will not disappoint

    'Round this love I draw a circle

    in your favorite shade of purple

    And give to you the garden of my heart


    Posted By zaac | Sep 6, 2011
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    WOOOWWW!!!! THESE LINES ARE ABSOLUTELY A BREATHTAKING PIECE OF ART, DAVID!!
    THEY GIVE ME GOOSE-BUMPS, JUST THE THOUGHT OF THESE WORDS TOUCHING MY HEART....
    GREAT INPUT FROM YOUR POWERFUL BRAIN, SWEETHEART!!
    IN FACT, I WROTE SOME LYRICS FOR YOU AGAIN. I SHALL POST IT SOON...
    LOVE IT, LOVE YOU!!
    STARRY.:meeting:


    Posted By stardust | Sep 6, 2011
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    thank you starry...we are praying for you. prepare to be amazed at what your God can do.


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    INTENSE ... hands that make one breathless ..I miss those kind of hands, you awe with your simplicity !


    Posted By JONATHAN | Sep 8, 2011
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    zaac Banned

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    thank you jonathan...it is good to be writing again. life is taking interesting turns. should be quite a few more turns of the lyrical crank in me yet. i'm just gettin old enough to realize i dont have to know everything...god is good lol.


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    HOWDY DAVID,
    I AM GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK WRITING AGAIN.
    ARE YOU MOVING OUT FROM YOUR PLACE??
    WHERE TO?? MAYBE, TO ANOTHER STATE??...
    I WONDER...
    PLEASE, LET ME KNOW THE UPDATES ABOUT YOUR HEALTH.
    GOD KEEPS BLESSING YOU WITH MUSIC & POETICAL TALENTS!!
    MUCH LOVE ALWAYS,
    STARRY.:giftrose::giftrose::giftrose:


    Posted By stardust | Oct 10, 2011
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    hi starry...no i'm not moving anywhere other than a bigger house. helping to form and shape the music ministry for a new church. got a producer for the cd and an engineer or two. still looking for some players who also write. going back to work soon. health is better. i'm still crazy as a loon but hey, some things have to stay the same...and i'm still an instigator and occasionally enjoy being the burr under the proverbial saddle to some who still just dont get it...or get me for that matter.

    Its all good...no worries. Kinda goin into seclusion for awhile to write and to prepare for the next several months and resting as much as I can. Keeping you in my prayers starry. Keep believing.

    z


    Posted By zaac | Oct 31, 2011
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