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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Love That Cannot Comprehend

    These laces and traces
    Of good night
    Kiss my soul
    But I can’t want them
    Or have them
    I must let go

    Ages of undying love
    For my best friend
    Who stood beside me until her bitter end!

    I don’t want to watch but I must defend…

    Some people die and others you just let go
    But I must take this love, ever so
    Ever so heart ache
    One to love and one to want to take,
    in a moment, in a breath.

    Life takes your life away
    So you grab your piece of reality
    And fade away
    Fade away
    Because the timing isn’t right, just yet
    Until life deals her cards your way

    Don’t cry your tear
    It’s not so near
    And really not so dear
    As hearts that want for something clear
    To speak and tell the answer you’ve been waiting for
    But cannot touch because you’re committed to love now
    And just can’t let go…..not now
    Hold on
    Hold on
    And you will find what you are waiting for
    Maybe not some other man, and maybe not me,
    Maybe just the moment that you need
    To touch your heart
    So it doesn’t bleed
    Until you find the love you need




    Don’t let go…not now
    For deep is the well that touches your soul
    So deep you know you can’t let go.



    I’ll be here if your love should tell,
    That I am the one to love you so.


    To whisper “I love you’s”
    Longer than you can know
    But now is not the time.

    For your love must be complete
    In every corner, at every street
    To touch the soul that keeps your heart
    In scared places that cannot part
    From deep roots that water
    Who you are
    And who you want to be
    In some distant place
    That is really not a fantasy
    It really is you with me.

    So finish love today my dear
    And find the love you hold so dear
    In arms that watch and somehow wait
    Until we finish the love that trades
    For us to find and keep our word
    Of love that’s spoken but hardly heard.

    Love is truer when it mends
    The hearts that cannot comprehend
    The love that has been given them.


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Jul 4, 2007
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    even men hug Jerry hugs buddy such a heartfelt penning of a love for someone special who leaves to early in life magnificently written in such a loving but painful way
    elegant beautiful and a great dedication to a lost love
    handshakes
    bear


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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    not lost yet but soon to be!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Jerru


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    Dear Jerry,

    This is simply breath-taking, beautiful, and now I am all misty. Beautiful write for your friend. I read this over and over. I cannot quote a favorite line, because I would quote the entire poem. Love ya!

    Kimmy :)

    Curtis Spider Lee Curtis Spider Lee

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    I like this one Jer, it seem to cry out and grab my attention! Thank you for sharing this warm and wonderful write!

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    doesn't it suck when the timing isn't right? when all you want is that one person to realize that u are the one for them.. that u will strive for excellence..that u will do everything and anything in your power to make that one person be happy.. and sometimes they even know tht.. but just want to be stubborn and "see what Else is out there"..or they don't know it.. and fail to see what is right before their eyes.. the truth hidden by the their own shadows..the shadows They make.. I totally know how ya feel man.. for real.:monkey-no:

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Apryl,

    Thank you for you kind comments and taking the time to stop in and read my work.

    Jerry
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    oppps! Thanks to everyone for your kind words and stopping in. I just now realized I haven't thanked you all.

    I'll try to get better at this!

    Jerry

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    WOW! My fav. lines in your poem was totally beautiful and surreal. The love in your heart is full to overflowing. The imagery and heartfelt words are absolutely breathtaking!
    Thanks for sharing
    Blessings

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Sally,

    thank you so much for sharing your response......I'm glad you enjoyed it!

    Jerry

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    wow....beautiful....
    It is much more eloquent than I ever could say...
    Love is this way isn't it?

    *speechless*

    Intricate soul intricate soul

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    Jerry, I mean... dude if you write another word I will have to refuse you future adm to my mind files~LOL. Really I'm sure you've truly captured alot of the things many of us know too well with love. There's that butterflies and then there's this heart-ache. My congrats on such a wonderful piece.

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