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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Lovers in Moonlight
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    A fire storm radiates deep within my heart,
    As I stare into her fiery green eyes,
    This fiery love so close to being a sin,
    As the flames of passion hypnotizes me.
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    I feel the night surrounding us
    All I want is to touch her beautiful face,
    My screaming spirit is in an uproar,
    But she’s unable to hear it.
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    I wanted to drowned these raging flames,
    But I'm so preoccupied with thoughts of her,
    And with the poison of her fiery desires
    Her love is something I cannot be without,
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    As these flames rage on deep within my heart,
    A roaring blaze of flames and ashes,
    These feelings are not just mine alone,
    She’s a wild cat that will not be domesticated
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    I know that no-one will understand ,
    The secrets that I hold deep in my heart,
    As we remain endlessly apart, a unique couple,
    Mere Lovers in Moonlight


    Posted By Bear | Apr 12, 2007
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    Dear Bear,

    :wow: This is soft, sensual, hot, real, raw, has a taboo-ish tone, and quite beautiful all in one. You do write some beautiful poetry. That mysterious woman must be somethin for you to scribe like this!! Whew! I feel the desire, the longing, and internal churn if you will. :bravothanx: Would love for someone to scribe about / for me like this; would melt my glasses!! Love it Bear!!!! You are amazing!!

    {{{~~**PAINTED**~~}}};)2

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    I think it's great! I'm definatly printing out this one and sticking it in my locker ;)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    The passion within this piece just radiates beautifully BEAR - but it's a sad reverie of sorts - The thought of being without your lover, glancing at each other from afar, yet never having that one opportunity to simply kiss and hold strong to each other...

    Definitely passionate. I wonder though - do you believe in destiny?
    Very nice piece of poetry - thanx for the sharing!

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Apr 13, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much for these fantastic comments Ms.J, Painted and brianna, AND yes I do believe in destiny, One day we will meet and hopefully become one.
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 13, 2007
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