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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    Bleeding, crying, screaming,
    Clawing your way up the wall,
    With nothing more than bloody hands,
    Anytime you’re doomed to fall,

    Wide, frightened eyes,
    Quickened breath and blood drenched skin,
    Cowering in the corner,
    Love’s requiem within,

    Tears of distress,
    Falling down your cheeks,
    Pain, suffering, and sadness,
    That you’ve bundled up for weeks,

    Streaks of red,
    Highlight your room,
    Iron scented atmosphere,
    Foreshadowing your doom,

    Steady flow of blood,
    Quivering at your fingertips,
    Drawing out a self portrait,
    Of the blood that drips,

    Instead of slowing, your heart beats faster,
    Losing control of your nerves,
    Rusted razorblade missing its target,
    Your arm is covered with accidental curves,

    One last time, against the wall,
    Tainted hair a crimson shade,
    Ripped shirt, holey pants,
    Inside depression is like a raid,

    Fight it, Fight it; Pupils dilating,
    Trembling and shivering become inevitable,
    The reality all surges to you at once,
    Your hair becomes just another thing to pull,

    Going crazy? A feeling of lost sanity,
    The silence you once befriended is now breaking you,
    Sharper than the daggers that pierced your heart,
    Severed, its pieces lay two,

    Still clawing you try to understand,
    How tonight ended up like this,
    Blood shot eyes blurring,
    In this nightmare you reminisce,

    The sky turns jet-black,
    The foreshadowing element takes its play,
    Like a well written mystery,
    You follow deaths way,

    Piercing screams echo on the silent wind,
    The howling reflection of the jet-black sky on the lake,
    It’s as if every living thing had vanished,
    Or maybe in deaths realm you have awake,

    Still trembling, you lay lifelessly,
    Jet-black snow falling from paradise,
    Snow falling on you as if a shield,
    Until your immortal soul will again rise.


    Posted By Aumakua | Sep 9, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Wow...this is torturous!
    Very vivid and detailed and I can
    relate to some of it. Awesome write, enjoyed:hug:


    Posted By Moonchild | Sep 10, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    Yay, glad you enjoyed it ^^

    Dark poems are awsome xO


    Posted By Aumakua | Sep 15, 2007
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