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    She walks like an Angel walks
    She talks like an Angel talks
    She ruminates on the oddest things
    and I know (for sure) that she has wings

    She is beautiful in an evening gown
    but her eyes are like far away stars
    that don't just light up men's eyes
    but distant galaxies as well

    Her Heart causes diamonds to shine
    and Rubies to glow
    Without her the Sun couldn't shine
    and the moon couldn't glow

    Yes, she walks like an Angel walks
    and she talks like an Angel talks
    and her Heart is always bright and aglow
    but there is that one secret thing that I know

    For the Universe whispers this into my distracted eyes
    She is not really an Angel at all
    but just a pure Goddess (in sweetest disguise)
    and I am in Love with Her so
    • Love Love x 1


    Posted By Mayflow | Nov 28, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh my - well thank you so much for the tribute Mayflow - I had no idea you felt this way about yours truly - The International Poetry Goddess! :LOL: --- All kidding aside ==> This is a really beautiful write - nice rhythm - the rhyme scheme is on-point and unforced which makes for a lovely read! LOving the Goddess indeed!

    Thanks for the share :yes:

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 30, 2012
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    Ariono-jovan Labu Member

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    buenos dias flor de mayo? had to chime my 2 cents in on this como yo tambien. just felt the ease of the canvas yeah. keep making your magic. paz-

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    This is so dreamlike and surreal, the images bringing an aura of magic. Beautifully written, yet a depth of spirituality that I always look for in poems. This made me feel really good. thanks for sharing it with me, jeanne

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