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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Make me a river that I can cross
    Without too much stress or strain,
    Make me a morning without so much frost
    That'll numb me from the pain.

    Give me a mountain that I can climb
    Before the sky turns gray,
    Give me a moment of precious time
    Before it slips away.

    Send me an evening with thousands of stars
    That lights up the darkness of night,
    Send me a memory without many scars
    That'll seem to appear in my sight.

    Read me a story of winters and springs
    Of babies, a husband and wife,
    Read me a picture of everyday things
    A picture of everyday life.

    Help me have patience with all of my dreams
    I see within my frail mind,
    Help me to look into all of these things
    Now that I'm old and so blind.

    Abae New Member

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    Nice poem you have here.

    It really brrings out the feelings.


    Posted By Abae | Jun 4, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Thank you very much Abae.

    Your comment was greatly appreciated. :)

    Blessings

    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    ah.. i often journey through woods just to gather my feelings... some times i fall into the awesomeness of nature... other times i just reflect on the sounds and surroundings....
    anyways... your write reminded me of a time that i went wading through a stream to a river with friends of mine... we went along for maybe two miles.... and it was such a hot day out, when in the water we really appreciated the coolness of it....
    thank you for your passionate write...
    peace and light to you friend...
    phil

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