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    nomad,

    this is really nice. the imagery kinda sucked me in to the point of seeing the two horses in a sea of waving golden grass. your writing is getting even better than it was.

    zaac


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    Thanks a lot for the compliment, zaac! I think maybe you weren't reading my stuff back then...lol! It's almost a year old...but I DO appreciate your taking the time to read it now! :thankyou: :thankyou:

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    magnificent penning Nomad filled with great images
    hugs kisses
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    some very pretty imagery here...nicely said...


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    Bear and Beki, thank you for your time and comments. I'm happy that you liked it.

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    Dear Nomad, Therese:
    Bravo Poet!! Wooowww!!..."Making Memories" is the perfect title that leads the reader to a perfect poem of yours. The beauty of your poem comes out in every form from beginning to ending. The imagery, the rhyming patterns, the vision and perspectives outlined in your poem transport the readers to another virtual dimension. I know that, when I am prepare to read a poem of yours, it will be just PERFECT. I could not ask for more, sweetheart, because its contents indeed feels the cup to the brim...I feel like coming back to bask in its beauty and read it endlessly. I am sorry that I have missed it in the past. And, I am glad that I have found it now. You ought to write a Book with all your wonderful Poems, dear Therese.
    Well, I take this special moment to wish MERRY CHRISTMAS and HAPPY NEW YEAR 2008 TO YOU and YOUR LOVED ONES!! BEST WISHES FOR THE INCOMING NEW YEAR, DEAR NOMAD. You really deserve the very best!! You are really great!!
    Thank you so much, for sharing your poetic talents with us!!
    (((Hugs and Blessings))) Starry.:word_hello::thankyou:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 19, 2007
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    Hello again Starry...haven't seen you around lately, but that's probably my fault...just wanted to say thank you for your really encouraging comment on this piece. I loved it, and I hope that, as always, you are doing wonderfully my friend.

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    Sounds like making Whoopie but I'll go along with making memories. Overall I thought this was more refreshing than a hot steamy shower with bar of Irish Springs after coming home musky! You created some succulent sensual sayings in this that I definitely won't forget!
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LOL! That was funny! It's all in the making of memories, isn't it? Everything we do, big or small, the effects our actions have upon those around us...good or bad...all memorable...though I'm sure some we'd rather forget.

    This was written from romantic perspective, or maybe a woman's, with the emphasis on the tenderness and togetherness of the couples...whoopie or no. :girltender:

    Nomad

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