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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    We are unlike no other
    we embrace you like
    the rings of Saturn

    We are part of every Life's painted beauty
    tall as the Island Palm
    strong as the Cypress__on duty

    We are the refreshing Oasis of night
    and the morning Dove in flight

    We are the pot of Gold
    at the end of the Skittle Rainbow
    and the passionate force
    behind every man's fermented soul

    Cultured like fresh water pearls
    different shades of sunbathed prisms
    the Map of Women
    in every legend of the world

    We shine flawlessly
    like diamonds
    of the African Mines

    The most beautiful
    Map of Women
    from the beginning
    of time

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    I really love this( hmmm I say that a lot) but anywayz I love women with all my heart and have an immeasurable amount of love for them, so When I see what you have to say about women I jus read the screen and sit here and nod, itz like you're talking to me and telling me one of those old time stories that explain why something is the way it is now...Thank you;


    Posted By KingAce | Jul 24, 2006
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    Thank you King for taking the time to read, and also commenting, this came after, I was reading diaries from woman from around the globe, and all their trials, and triumphs. Among all the woman, no matter their location on the map, they were all strong, and seems to strive toward a common denominator. Thank you so much for your warm feedback Take Care.

    Much Luv'...~*Painted*~
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Yes, this pays homage to woman, however, I also acknowledge the trials, and triumphs of men on the map as well. We are such a unique species, very tenacious, to say the least.
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    Hey KIM - a fitting tribute for me - Thanx very much! That aside - It really is a fitting tribute for all women to have such praise doled upon them.

    The stanza I highlighted is especially poignant, as it really is an effortless thing to simply be that which the Maker has endowed one with.

    I like this poem - It speaks of beauty, but yet speaks of the unfathomable strength that is: WOMAN!

    Thanx for sharing

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 31, 2006
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    Love this! After reading it, I found myself sitting up a little straighter with my head held up a little higher. Proud and glad to be a woman! I'll have to come back and read this whenever I get those "old", "fat" negative feelings! Thanks for the lift!


    Posted By Altree94 | Aug 10, 2006
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    Thank you soooo much Tree, first for taking time to read, then comment. Thank you for the warm comments. Yes, we should be proud. Our Land is not called "MOTHER EARTH"!! for nothin!! I am flattered to read, when feeling negative, this poem will be read. That is a great compliment, and I thank you so much. Your Welcome for the "Lift"!!

    PD

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