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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by mysticpoet729, May 27, 2007.



    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    Me

    I know I have made some mistakes.
    I know i have problems to deal with.
    Dealing with the pressures of society.
    And the way my mind is going.
    It may seem that I'm going crazy.
    That I'm losing my head.
    i'm hearing noises,
    From both sides,
    Trying to set me straight.
    But they are not helping me.
    All I see is people giving me opinions.
    Making my condition worse.
    But I am starting to see things,
    In a different light.
    They can not get rid of it.
    And it can not leave on their own.
    the only person,
    who can put control in this situation is,
    ME!

    Jeez Banned

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    fabiola,

    This is a good
    message, to your
    self and for others.

    You are showing
    us your inner
    strengths.

    Great.

    Thanks for the
    read.


    Posted By Jeez | May 28, 2007
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Excellent poem, thanks for sharing

    mysticpoet729 The "Mystic" Poet

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    thank you very much..blushing.

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