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    gustave3 New Member

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    Mellow

    Drama





    Do you dream of me when the stars populate the skies

    Who is the man who made you realize

    that your sweet, sexy smell is enough to send any man through emotional lows and highs

    Is my voice the one that will open those thighs



    These words alone make this page cry

    Nothing but honey drenched tears

    that gently glide to earth like the rain from a warm summer sky



    Your presence in space and time are sublime blessings to my eyes

    The very essence of your body balances beauty and brains

    in a perfect combination that culminates at your smooth, toned, brown thighs



    How can you be denied

    I mean, has any man successfully tried

    A wolf in sheeps clothing must have been his disguise

    Youre on my mind like a fat person thinks of cakes and pies cakes and pies



    I must have been out my damned mind

    To think we arrived at the same place

    at the same time

    Only to be turned back by

    you keep whats yours

    and

    Ill keep whats mine

    and

    let THAT keep me from claiming my prize



    Ill be over in five minutes

    To

    Separate the truths from the lies

    And

    Get us back on tract with an all night love exercise



    Original Thoughts

    By

    Michael Parson

    May 2002


    Posted By gustave3 | Aug 18, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    OK - I hear ya GUSTAVE - intimate and ravenous indeed comes to mind after smiling through this beautiful artistry of yours!

    cakes & pies cakes & pies - interesting flow you got going on - Liked this one immensely - thanx for sharing!

    Jacquii.


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    Very delightful and taseful scribe here!!!!! Your comparisons are very creative, and the flow was quite lovely, I might add! Your original thoughts are....original, as I have never imagined about one thinking of cakes and pies like that !!! I enjoyed this extremely, and read it many times. Great write, and please post more!!!! Thank you for posting this one!!!

    Painted Diary aka Kimberly

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