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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 21, 2006
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    WooHoo...extremely visual for me...thanks...I needed that.


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    Posted By Jeez | Oct 29, 2006
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    I can't say exactly why, but I got an overwhelming sense of sweet sadness from this poem. Perhaps it was the inclusion of the wolves or the way it starts with trying to hold on.
    You do have some fantastic imagery here, Jeez! But did you have to use a Tree? LOL!


    Posted By Altree94 | Jan 11, 2007
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    Dear Jeez, this was simply incredible. The visuals dance and seem to have a humanistic quality to them. WOW....such masterful writing. I was moved by this piece, and read it several times. Sometimes I read poems from bottom up, and the feeling was so intense. I am left in a world of tranquility after reading. I love the form, the execution, balance, and how you were able to place me there, "in it" so to speak, and thank is amazing talent. Even the shape of the poem reminded me of this tree, so your creativeness flowed throughout, from the beginning to end. Thank you for sharing this, and continue to spread your lyrical wings. I loved it!!! :bravo:

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    Posted By Jeez | Jan 14, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | Jan 14, 2007
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    Dear Ms Jeez :giftrose:,

    I had to come back for yet another read. Just :wow: Thanks Jeez.

    Kim :)

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    Posted By Jeez | May 27, 2007
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    You write in a way that all words are beautiful.
    I say it this way because I didn't wanna repeat what was already said about the visuals. So I will just say, lovely job!
    It was a great read, I enjoyed it greatly.

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    Incredible Write Jeez beautiful images. love this poem
    hugs kisses
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    Posted By Bear | May 28, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | May 30, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | May 30, 2007
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    Posted By Jeez | May 30, 2007
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    Wow!
    Everyone has said what i've meant to say...but very nice.
    I was kinda like...it looks long..but it was so good i got into it :]
    thanks so much for it!
    *huggles*

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    Posted By Jeez | Jun 12, 2007
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