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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by Benny, Oct 29, 2006.



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    Somewhere beyond mere words
    lie gestures of the heart
    where spirit births desire
    and love prepares its art.
    Elusive to the mortal mind,
    expressions are on hold;
    only Angels ere' confess
    the echo of the soul.

    Each generation plans assault
    through lofty vows pursued,
    seeking but to claim embers
    of what so oft eludes.
    Folly follows good intent,
    our best love yet acerb
    as mortal tongues do contend
    to capture love in word.


    Posted By Benny | Oct 29, 2006
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    Totally AWESOME!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Oct 29, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    Thank you...it is an old one...back when I seemed to make all my work rhyme. Still like to do it...


    Posted By Benny | Oct 29, 2006
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    Benny! I had no idea that you were such a romantic! I really like the rhymes in this and even the near-rhymes are near enough so that the rhythm isn't thrown off. Nice Write!


    Posted By Altree94 | Nov 1, 2006
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    mistyllspoetry Billy Corgan's Shadow

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    Beautiful flow of words. This poem is good for the heart and mind. Thank you.

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