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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Gentle winds of temptation blow
    softly rustling hair enough
    to tickle the nape of the neck.

    Eyes closed to shade
    thoughts of desire as it
    tingles up and down the spine.

    Lips purse to moue
    as the breeze settles and then
    sighs as lips follow in it's wake.

    Dreams become erotic and erratic
    as desire courses through the veins
    like waves of the ocean until
    they rise once more to
    crash against the shore
    where the waves become
    gentle like the breeze that
    blew the waves in.

    © Mysty Johnson 11/04/2012
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    Posted By Mysty | Nov 8, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    This is a beautifully serene poem Mysty - Quite lovely really!
    I'm loving the last stanza which closes the poem nicely. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this Mysty.
    As for publishing on http://greetingsgalleryonline.com -- I really haven't designed for the site in a minute. This poem would be a nice fit - but as per the guidelines - should be only 4-8 lines -- I imagine 9 lines wouldn't be much different.

    The 3 stanzas total 9 lines - which could be placed on a greeting card itself. Then the last stanza is 8 lines - it also could work as a standalone piece for ecard... But the entire poem cannot be placed on a card in its current format anyway.

    Thoughts?

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 20, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Thanks for the share btw! :yes:


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 20, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    np it was an accident placing it there and I did not know how to remove it.
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    Posted By Mysty | Nov 20, 2012
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    I love it and this is indeed a happy accident, You are a subtle temptress arent you?
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    Posted By JONATHAN | Nov 22, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LOL thanks Jonathan...... I am told so ; )


    Posted By Mysty | Nov 23, 2012
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    Subtle Temptress indeed!
    So... Now - let's say Published Subtle Temptress :yes:
    I've created the ecard for you, as I love this poem. See it at Midnight Breeze | GreetingsGalleryOnline.com

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    Hope you like it like it like it!

    J.
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    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 25, 2012
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I LOVE IT Ms Jacquii!!!!!:yes: :kiss:


    Posted By Mysty | Nov 26, 2012
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    :yay:
    So happy to have gotten your seal of approval! It's a nice ecard for an exquisite verse.

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Nov 26, 2012
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