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  1. Artistic

    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    These words in darkness write
    like wisps of smoke
    in pale moonlight,
    speaking of emotions bared
    and tossed about
    like no one cared.

    Who doth approach
    in these dreams I have ?
    With harsh reproach,
    and no creative redemption
    your touch slips through
    despite all absention.

    I toss and I turn
    so deep asleep
    in a dream that burns.
    Sheets tossed wide,
    in the morning
    there is evidence I cried.

    ©2013 Mysty Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Jun 13, 2013
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    Wow! sometimes poetry is like hypnosis that brings out a pain that is buried deep under so many layers of fake bravado and confidence. You give away so freely of yourself in this poem and there is a pious purity in the frailness and vulnerabilty in your written voice. Stick moist pillows huh? I have and continue to have them, as a kid my single mom who was not financially able to educate or maintain me put me into a missionary home for boys, I still have nightmares from back then, the hazing and ragging I went through still haunts. this was so close to home for me. wow!


    Posted By JONATHAN | Jun 13, 2013
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    aww I wish I could erase that time of your life. I hate having anyone I love feel such pain and horror. Thank you for reading and I am so sorry I brought it all back. Love and hugs

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Jun 15, 2013
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