Welcome to JPiC Forum For Writers! Please log in or sign up to interact with our Community.
  1. Welcome!

    Hello Guest | Welcome To Jacquii's Poetry in Color Forum


    JPiC Forum for Writers is an online community exclusively dedicated to the share of poetry and writing. As a continuing work-in-progress, our poetry forums host a melange of writing with new additions being posted daily. We encourage you to right now and come join us in our celebration of diversity with the typed word!

Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Mysty, Sep 6, 2007.



  1. Artistic

    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

    Member Since:
    Nov 1, 2006
    Message Count:
    925
    Trophy Points:
    43
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    Canadian Prairies
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +52 / 0 / -0

    MISTS

    In sleepless haze
    I drift along a sea
    of poignant memories
    that touched me then
    and
    tease me now
    so that when
    I fall asleep again
    I dream I am still
    in your arms.
    Here,
    where I know love
    like none
    I have ever felt.

    I inhale scents of
    musk and timbers
    reminiscent of forests
    in spring.
    I am drawn into
    eyes shaded like mists
    of palest green with flecks
    of gold and frosty blue.


    Then
    someone calls my name,
    an irritated voice
    and my dream is gone,
    the memories sadly fade away
    making me yearn
    to get lost in the mist
    for all time.



    ©2007 Sandra Elizabeth Johnson


    Posted By Mysty | Sep 6, 2007
    #1

  2. Cool

    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

    Member Since:
    Nov 14, 2006
    Message Count:
    1,980
    Trophy Points:
    53
    Location:
    Claremont, CA
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +14 / 0 / -0
    Mysty, this is such a sweet "down-filled" softness of a dream, safe and on cloud nine...then it evaporates so rapidly...I can feel the mood changing...and have been there! Not that I would literally not want to wake up, but it's so nice to be in such an exquisit fantasy dream.

    Nomad

    TheBlackPoet New Member

    Member Since:
    Aug 20, 2007
    Message Count:
    62
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Location:
    Houston, Texas
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +1 / 0 / -0
    Mysty.., you are so wrong!!!!!! i was flowing along your lines..,

    At first, i had this image of you in bed, tossing and turning, your mind alert with thoughts of me.... (i mean of someone)..,

    then, when you got to the trees, I had this wiccan image of you in the forest..,

    then.... ****the damn record scratches..... and all those images fade away to mist..... and i leave you in your noisy reality, because some ingrate calls your name......

    hahahaaha...

    i loved it..
  3. Artistic

    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

    Member Since:
    Nov 1, 2006
    Message Count:
    925
    Trophy Points:
    43
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    Canadian Prairies
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +52 / 0 / -0
    *GRINS* ... Hey TBP you never know what I was thinking of lol..... that is my secret ;) Thanks for reading hon. :)

    Thank You J.Rose........ if anyone knows how to dream it sure is me....

    And Ms Nomad lol I was there in that jarred mood soon as I got home and discovered my internet bill had not been paid and was suspended. Thank God it was pay day. And thanks for reading hon :)

    Love Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Sep 7, 2007
    #4
  4. Cool

    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

    Member Since:
    Nov 14, 2006
    Message Count:
    1,980
    Trophy Points:
    53
    Location:
    Claremont, CA
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +14 / 0 / -0
    Haha TBP! That was a good one...lol!!

    Mysty...heaven forbid! Talk about a day in hell...glad it was payday...my goodness, this thing is addicting! No wonder I can't find time to write...I'm too busy reading nowadays..

    Nomad

    Bear JPiC Contributor

    Member Since:
    Dec 7, 2006
    Message Count:
    824
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Books:
    0
    Ratings Received:
    +0 / 0 / -0
    beautiful daudream Mysty magnificent penning
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Sep 8, 2007
    #6

We hope you're enjoying our forum!

Only registered Members have access to posting priviledges. Registration here is 100% FREE. Use the button below to begin registration or the form on the right to login to your account.

Forgot your password?

Share This Page

GreetingsGalleryOnline.com