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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Misty Mountain Vista
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    A silent mist drifts over the grass and flowers,
    As an eerie stillness descended upon the forest,
    The wood’s are now a place of mystery
    Filled with sensations of desires and passion.
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    Others have journeyed through this forest,
    Their tranquil spirits linger here still today.
    Did they enjoy the magnificent scenery as I do,
    Or maybe this was their secret rendevous?
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    Did someone conceal their love affair here?,
    perhaps fulfill their secret desires and passions?
    Maybe a princess with a commoner,
    Hiding their love from her fathers seething rage,.
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    We do not feel fear in this mountain hideaway,
    The ambience is soothing, tranquil and serene,
    Gazing out at this beautiful misty scene,
    Filling our heart with love, giving us cozy feeling.
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    Holding my Darlings hand gently,
    I drop to one knee, and with a trembling voice
    I whisper to her “ Like many before us”,
    “In this beautiful misty vista, I ask you this Question”
    “ Sweetheart will you marry me?”


    Posted By Bear | Apr 20, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    very touching bear i went through a spell where not many reveiwed my poems hopefully their will be a great many to this lovely piece
    I have to say bear I admire how you don't get reveiws on some pieces yet still post so frequently shows character,

    this poem was a beautiful journey and such a new facet of poetry

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Erike

    Thank you so much for your great comment If one person reads my poems and enjoys them or that they bring them good memories then I am happy
    handshakes
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 21, 2007
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    This is very touching and dare I say romantic Bear. Thank You for a sharing a piece of your soul.


    ~Mysty~


    Posted By Mysty | Apr 22, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Mysty

    Thank you for your wonderful comment and Yes I am a romantic lol once again thank you
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Apr 22, 2007
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