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    Could it be the distant moon
    That sweetens the night
    That softens the slight
    Of daylight?

    Or is it the moonlight
    That softens my heart
    That coddles the start
    Of insight?

    Moon, in sky, remains objective;
    Moonlight: intimate, reflective.

    Moon and moonlight,
    Silver lining, faithful friend.

    One over my shoulder
    One on my skin.


    Posted By LynnEllen | Feb 12, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    I like the observation of this.
    Creative and well thought out.
    Really enjoyed! Great write all around!
    Welcome to PIC, hope to read more from you :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Feb 12, 2008
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    Terence Member

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    Hi Lynn Ellen, welcome to JPIC. A very, very nice intro from you. This flows extremely well and has much meaning. Great write.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Feb 12, 2008
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    Love the way you set up the words for the separation of "light"


    Posted By Lindamay | Feb 12, 2008
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    LynnEllen Minstrel

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    Thanks, all, for the kind words and observations. I appreciate your appreciation ;)

    May your pens forever flow with ease and eloquence.


    Posted By LynnEllen | Feb 12, 2008
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