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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, May 3, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Moonlit Fantasy

    Moonlight surrounded us and the breeze is serene
    With lifting hearts we gazed upon the starlit sky
    The slumbering trees never looked so green
    Within our moonlit dreams

    O, Darling love me, just as much as I you
    And be the sweetest of companion your way
    Take my love and joy and endless trust
    With this thread of silver line the fairest and dispiriting days

    Your love is as bright and warm as then it always is
    You gentle dream to share the long years through
    What more dare I ask ? Just to hear you say again
    "I love you, My dear. You know, you know I always have"


    Posted By Bear | May 3, 2008
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    Beautiful the way you
    have made it feel as if
    it's floating gently along.

    The fantasy is to hear
    the words from your
    you did write.

    To echo from afar from
    our hearts to yours
    that we care and always
    will.

    We readers of your heart.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Abae | May 4, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you Abae for your magnificent comment
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | May 4, 2008
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Very beautiful again, thank you for sharing with us

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    It is my pleasure to share my writtings with all of you and I appreciate all the great comments.
    hugs kisses
    bear

    And I am sorry for not commenting so much recently I was trying to use the time I have sitting and typing poems because of my bad knees and hand tremmerswhich frustrates me because I want to comment, but have to try to remember which poems Ive read.


    Posted By Bear | May 20, 2008
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    it is a very natural poem that brings butterflies in the stomach and endless smile's to mind. very romantic, i will remember this one.

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    it is a very natural poem that brings butterflies in the stomach and endless smile's to mind. very romantic, i will remember this one.

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