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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by Poetry, Jul 19, 2007.



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    I wake beside the wide blue waters

    which suffer me to drink them in


    and sweat out bird song and mirrored clouds.


    Posted By Poetry | Jul 19, 2007
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    For a short poem, this has a lot to say. I'm a nature person, so I really enjoyed this.

    :topofthemornin:


    Posted By JolieH | Jul 19, 2007
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    Very interesting..... yes alot to say .. I wonder why you entitled it Moose Jaw. We have a city here called Moosejaw lol.

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    Posted By Mysty | Jul 20, 2007
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    Poetry Poetry

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    I call it Moose Jaw because on another site a guy from Moose Jaw opined that he didn't like what I wrote or the way I wrote it. My view is one should alway use criticism as inspiration. Write even more--if only to annoy those who don't like it!

    :sun:


    Posted By Poetry | Jul 20, 2007
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    Well I like it :)


    Posted By Mysty | Jul 23, 2007
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