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    TrueBlue New Member

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    -"Of The Wonder and The Miracle"
    Seasons and process
    Everything organized
    To the molecule.

    - "Teenage Crush In Retrospect"
    Routinely broken
    My confused adoration
    I asked for your love

    -"Is This Reality?"
    My own body exists
    Here in solidarity
    Placed inside the mind

    -"Escape"
    Lost in the image
    Love, order, and cleanliness
    Respect - an escape

    -"Unorderable Order"
    Regulated life
    An existentialist's dream
    Inadvertantly


    Posted By TrueBlue | Jul 16, 2006
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    These are fabulous. I LOVE HAIKUS. I am working on a series, that I am going to do Japanese painting to. TrueBlue, you are a wonderful addition to the JPiC Forum for Writers!:topofthemornin:
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey PAUL - I love the form haiku also! And you have shown a really swift & brilliant use of language in your haiku.

    That is some piece of writing to use the word "existentialist's" LOL - in a haiku - seems it would take away from the piece, but it actually DEFINES the piece... Nice bit of wit went into making these fabulous!

    Nice sharing - Thanx

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 17, 2006
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    true blue- i could really dig "-"Of The Wonder and The Miracle & Escape". always been a fan of the eastern & even contemporary ku. it was treat to share in your word.

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