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    -"By Definition"
    Circular reason
    A fair representation
    This aspect of man

    -"Touch"
    In the listening hour
    Exchanged, uneasy glances
    I feel not afraid

    -"Suicide Girl"
    Lips still touched with fire
    The last night that she ever lived
    - Dying was painful

    -"Agoraphobia"
    Life in a vacuum
    Invisible things hiding
    Artificial light.

    -"Progress"
    Future universe
    The apple without the worm
    The infinite dream

    -"The Makings of a Tragedy"
    Tragicomedy
    Increasing numbers
    Fat man with a gun

    -"Industry"
    By definition
    In the sum of human effort
    The doubly processed

    - "Beautiful and Naked"
    Industry classes -
    With the advent of modern
    Naked interest

    -"Revolution Dreamers"
    Proletariat
    Constantly growing, unite -
    To lose but their chains!

    -"A Moment of Shock"
    Abolish marriage!
    Dowries prostitute women!!!
    A union in love?!!


    Posted By TrueBlue | Jul 16, 2006
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    More fabulous haikus TruBlue!!!! Keep writing!!
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Nice writing PAUL or PABLO or TRUEBLUE LOL - Which do you prefer?
    Anyway this is a really nice compilation of haiku. It's like each piece is a section of the same film - A series of pictures that make up one cartoon - ya know? It's like the artist has drawn a series of pictures on index cards that when you flip those cards in succession you'll see a little motion picture.

    Very interesting film you've created!
    Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.

    ps - the style reminds me of one of
    my own favorite poems :yes: ---->
    Check it out and see what you
    think about it - anxious to know
    your opinion: Passion Murmurs


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jul 17, 2006
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