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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Mother Nature’s Melody
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    As I walk to the lush green meadow
    A full moon guides me to a tall oak tree
    That I decide to sit underneath
    I close my eyes and listen,
    To natures tranquil comforting melodies
    ~
    The meadow is silent at first
    As nature arranges it’s special song,
    The silence is soon broken
    With a sweet aria of the nightingales
    ~
    Then a gentle refreshing breeze
    Rustles the leaves of the giant tree
    And the soothing hum of the grass
    Accompanies in this special tune
    And delicately whispers listen to me
    ~
    A beaver pounding its tail adds a rhythm to a very special song
    Joining in bull frogs tone adds a voice to the melody
    Next the streams adds a sound like the tickling of the pianos keys
    As water surges over stones in the meandering stream
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    Listening to the concert that nature is singing to me
    The most magnificent majestic melody
    I am refreshed as I soak up this magical tune
    I see the beauty of nature
    Not the smog, the filth or gloom of the city

    As I lay on a carpet of lush grass
    Safely cradling my spirit gently within its grasp
    As my eyes grow heavy as mother nature sings
    She whispers feel my strength enter you

    I awaken to the brilliance of glittering stars
    I am refreshed and my mind is restored
    I have learned when my spirit and soul are exhausted
    All I have to do is listen to Mother Nature’s Melody




    Posted By Bear | Jun 16, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Dear Bear:

    As a Mother Nature lover myself I fell in love with your words. The depth had taken me deep into the wooodland of the forest where you captured the essence of the land and feelings of nature. The imagery is flawless. Awesome write.

    Blessings

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Bear,

    It's almost like you take me camping when you write this kind of nature work. Awesome! I was there!

    My Fav:

    Jerry

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Sally thank you for your magnificent comment I always try to make the reader feel as if they are there listening seeing and feeling nature in it's most beautiful state.
    hugs kisses
    bear
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    Jerry thank you for your wonderful comment I'm very happy that your enjoyed and felt that you were camping out glad I was able to put that image into your mind
    handshakes
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 22, 2007
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