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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    As muses go she’s ok I suppose
    I’ve ascribed female qualities
    to her...elusive and temperamental
    at times...yet she remains unnamed
    not sure how to describe
    this phenomenon who
    pops in and out
    lisping little breathy glimmers
    of unseen plans and plots
    as they fluctuate between
    reality and fast fading
    imagination
    glamorously laying
    out the raiment
    of the poem
    while leaving the meat
    inside for me to fill in
    just like putting on our
    clothes….the bodies represent
    the substance and worthiness
    of the poem
    inside each of our minds
    we see and appreciate
    the forms and figures
    of others.

    © nomadicrhymer
    :curtsey:

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    this was very different,
    almost great when you say it with such ease
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks, Erik!!

    Nomad

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    This is interesting, different in a good way. The poetry critique people would like this. It has a lot good qualities. It reminds me a little of some fabulist short stories i read-
    extending genre just a bit.


    Posted By JolieH | Oct 5, 2007
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    Aumakua Misunderstood

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    You're poem is so true :D I like what you used to describe to poetry, really different :) And it was written so lovely ^^


    Posted By Aumakua | Oct 5, 2007
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    Hey now Nomad,

    Nice look at the instiller of all ideas, they come in all shapes and sizes - everyone has their own they call muse... If you provide the meat then they must be the potatoes, because potatoes and meat compliment each other very well indeed....
    "Lisping little breathy glimmers of unseen plans and plots.." Nice....
    Your muse is beaming, Nomad.


    Posted By lasher | Oct 5, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thank you guys so much for commenting...Riha, Jolie and lasher...this was one of those easy ones that just came to me while doodling on the paper...I like those, though it did seem just a teensy bit corny...lol! :yay:

    Wish they were all like that! Love you guys!

    Nomad
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    Excellent description Ms Nomad...I liked this as I love your style anyway. Yes, twas different..and that is the beauty of it all.

    Kim :)
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Thanks PD...glad to have you back in action...missed you!

    Nomad:realmad:

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