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Discussion in 'Spoken Word & Freestyle' started by lanaia74, Feb 7, 2007.



    lanaia74 New Member

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    I am a very sick man, as I am addicted to killing and to the blood
    Looking at me you would never fear me
    But my soul is tarnished, my aura is probably the color of mud
    The devil takes control of me at times, see.

    I have no trouble attracting the victims that I seek
    I use all kind of ploys, to get my victims, exactly where I want them
    At times, I act like I have a broken leg, I try to look so vulnerable and weak
    Attracting then to my car, so I can fulfil my sick sick whim.

    Sometimes, I impersonate a policeman
    Gaining the trust of those I intend to kill
    I choose my victims throughout the land
    But see, no one knows I am mentally ill


    I have been told how suave and wonderful, I can be
    Sometimes just inviting college girls just to come with me
    Most of my victims I bind, that way they can not flee
    Its not the lust of sex, it is the feeling I get when I kill, see.

    My unquenchable murderous thirst finally got the best of me
    Taking total control, mind, body, and soul, see
    When I got caught, it was a must for society, see
    Over zealous was I, to get caught because my name is Ted Bundy.


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    TheBlackPoet New Member

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    now.. i dont think this was written by Ted... but... it is chilling.... to think... that someone would think enough to want to write about the thoughts of a serial killer in such detail....

    still... this IS the nature of poetry... and i enjoyed it
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    hmmm...kinda gross...kinda entertaining...not sure how I feel about this one! I almost feel like I continued to read it against my will...talk about sick fascination!!

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    haha!!!!! NOMAD!!!

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