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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Aug 21, 2007.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    My Dragon Love
    ~
    Her head of crowned horns crowned
    drifted down my trembling body
    of tanned glistening flesh
    ~
    She breathed blazing fiery gasps
    Of air on me then took my soul
    With her forked tongue caress
    ~
    My beautiful she dragon
    Clawed my sizzling flesh
    With her long razored nails
    Her scales ripping my skin
    ~
    Begging I scream my love
    Make me your passionate toy
    And to your desires I will surrender
    Promising to quench your fiery thirst


    Posted By Bear | Aug 21, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Bear, this sounds scary!...different for you...who I look to for romance! LOL!! I suppose it is romance in a way? Re-reading...hmmm...I guess it's just raw s..e...x...ok, I get it! Very well written for the tempestuous dragon's tantalizing tail has got u wrapped in her grip!

    Nomad

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much MY sweeet Nomad I was given a few words and was told to write a poem so I did lol its just a little hot raw sex thank you for your great comment
    hugs ksses
    Bear
    ps love the new picture your simply beautiful


    Posted By Bear | Aug 23, 2007
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    I love dragons and I love love
    so I totally enjoyed this.
    Good images.
    This was a passionate and creative little write.
    Very nicely done!:hi: :goodjob:


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 23, 2007
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Did someone say hot raw sex? lolol Loved this Bear, different and nice to see you step out some......

    Kim :wub:

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Moonchild
    Thank you so very much I too love dragons and love love also loved your comment
    hugs kisses
    bear

    Painted
    thank you so much sweetie its not to far off of what I love to write about love nature whether its fantasy or real I think I have a very vivid imagination lol
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 23, 2007
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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Good write, Bear

    I like this part best

    She breathed blazing fiery gasps
    Of air on me then took my soul
    With her forked tongue caress

    I like the way it flowed
    and the way you rhymed your words

    Thanks for sharing
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    Mysty JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    LoL Bear this is a hot lil number...... but a She Dragon is more apt to eat you up in one gulp than satisfy her pleasures with a human. ahh well tis your fantasy and you can make them do whatever you want. ;) I enjoyed this.


    Posted By Mysty | Aug 25, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Poetryin motion for your great comment
    handshakes
    bear
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    Well Mysty she might want to have some fun first lol thank you so much my sweet Mysty for your great comment
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Aug 25, 2007
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