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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    MY FAIREST LOVE ~ SONNET

    There lies a simple love within mine heart,
    Where wealth could never damage nor despoil.
    A place where fairest beauty plays her part,
    Where trust is built upon pure Eden’s soil.

    The dark of yesterday no longer blinds.
    Thine eyes now leadeth me into the light.
    The dawning of tomorrow brightly shines.
    No ghouls nor demons teeth again can bite.

    The hand of love caressed my aging face,
    Where yesterday no man would dare to touch.
    Mine heart once beat within a bitter place,
    But through the years I’ve grown to love so much.

    Oh fairest love, behold my bleeding heart.
    Within your hands a rose’s thorns depart.

    © Karen Davies


    Posted By Moonchild | May 3, 2008
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    Tender is the night
    which takes my lady to flight
    holding hearts in skies blue
    twinkling beauty upon my dew.

    'Tis my smile that reflects
    within your eye with no regrets
    to hold you there forever more
    healing lonelinesses ugly scar.

    Thanks for the read.


    Posted By Abae | May 4, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    You're welcome and thanks for reading Abae :)


    Posted By Moonchild | May 4, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    Since my first sonnet, I've really come to appreciate this form. They're a little difficult to write but well worth the effort.
    This is just beautiful Karen.


    Posted By JolieH | May 13, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Jolie :)
    I've written over 300 now and I plan to write
    lots more. I love the Sonnet form!


    Posted By Moonchild | May 13, 2008
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    Amazing and wonderful penning Moonchild when written with the love you have and in the right concept make it truly an amazing write I love this poem
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | May 22, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thanks for reading me Tom :)
    Glad you love it!


    Posted By Moonchild | May 23, 2008
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    i was spellbound by it moonchild simply amazingly beautiful
    hugs kisses
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | May 23, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    Thank you Tom.
    That was nice of you to come
    back on and say that*hugs&kisses*
    It means a lot.


    Posted By Moonchild | May 23, 2008
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    This is a beautifully written sonnet. Perfect in form and rhyme and message as well. Knowing now how many you've written, no wonder it's so perfect. whew :)

    I enjoyed this a bunch... thanks.

    SuzyQ


    Posted By SuzyQ | Jun 24, 2011
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Karen! I agree with SuzyQ - this is really a beautifully and heartfelt write. I love the sonnet form, it's cadence, it's rhyme scheme, it's simplicity and it's capacity to be a thing of romantical beauty. "My Fairest Sonnet" indeed ==> inspires me to brief poetry:

    Amen

    A rose without thorns
    by any name would be called
    a storm on the conscience
    of freedom. Let it rain.

    Let there be such a thing
    as beauty in the eye of the
    last storm on the tip of thy
    last thorn. Let it be. Amen.


    :giftrose:


    Copyright © 2011 Jacquii Cooke

    Thanks for the share and thanks for the brief intermission from this great play we know well as "Writers Block" :yes:

    Jacquii.

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