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    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    SPRING

    Refresh
    Born again

    The horizon sings
    sweet morning harmonies
    to serenade the sun’s rise.

    “the Aroma of earth and rain”

    ©Jerry P. Quinn


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Jun 9, 2007
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    Beautiful!
    Inventor and MASTER of the form, I see!
    TY for posting, Jer!
    - Tree.
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    Posted By Altree94 | Jun 9, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    this seems like haiku taken to another level,

    I enjoyed the poem the ending and really realized
    it was a remarkable yet down to earth piece,

    it had all the elements that I like and proves your a thinker as well

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    thanks for all your kind comments Tree and Eric


    Posted By Jer4clarity | Jun 9, 2007
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    Dear Mr. Quinn,

    What an honor it is to have you here with us fist of all! Secondly, this poem was brilliant, exquisite, and it is quite evident why you are the master. The poem is just wow, and I could picture the horizon and smell the aroma; yes, you placed me there. Fantabulous!!!!!!!!! Welcome again to the community.

    Kimberly :)
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    I agree - that's why I like this form so very much.
    Such small amount of words = such succinct clarity!

    I loved this poem - Brings fond memories of honeysuckle in Tennessee Spring.
    Oh - and the scent right before a fresh rain - ah! Beautiful Clarity Pyramid JER ;)
    Thanx for the share

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jun 9, 2007
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    First time reading you poet but I dig your style....clarity...visuals...this was a scent teaser..as I read I created the scene in my mind....then i said it again to myself with my eyes closed....BEautiful...Spring = Rebirth ...this style of writing here is like the resurrection of a piece of something in my poetic mind....seriously..the creativity alone has inspired me.
    Perfect choice of words....perfect topic for such brevity


    Posted By ladylyric | Jun 20, 2007
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    cool post...was telling kit carson i need to try this form out...i think i will enjoy it...nice to meet the inventor...thanks for sharing.


    Posted By Checkmate | Jun 26, 2007
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    BEAUTIFUL!!! Jer:

    This is your first try at a Clarity Pyramid?

    It looks like you have been using this style for YEARS!!
    A proficient wordsmith!!

    I thought it was superb!!
    Blessings

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    beautiful jerry simply elegant
    handshakes
    Bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 26, 2007
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    wow.. as usual your poems are very beautiful. ..

    i agree with Bear.. "simply elegant"

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    My apologies for not sending my extreme thanks for all the awesome comments I have received for this poem. I wish to thank the following wonderful people:
    Kim, Bear, Louisianagal, Sally, Scott and Ladylyrics.

    I appreciate the time you spent giving me kudos.

    Jerry

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    Spring is the Mother's womb giving to us the hope for life in which we need, she is the delight in the eve with givings of fireflies and tides who ebb. She is the face we will never touch but always see. And thus giving us our reason to love her. (free write btw) Spring breathes unto us a whisper that inaudibly says Gift. I thank you Spring for without you the leaves would forever stay red and yellow, no fall I love you all the same, but our growth together with spring is my collaboration with you that helps me see more of mother earth. OH seasons! I am yours for without you I would be nothing.

    ~Tamare

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Tamare,

    thank you for sharing your comments!

    Jerry

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    Damn I wrote that! umh I was drunk while posting...........looks good tho

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    *huggles*
    GREAT!
    Loved:
    “the Aroma of earth and rain”
    Hmm. haven't been looking at poetry lately...too much going on. But i'm GLAD i saw this one. Great!
    *huggles*
    [[when is that new site coming up? xD]]

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