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    "My Mom Whispers from Heaven." (Poem). (Written 2-23-2007.)

    My mom whispers from Heaven:
    "My child, my Spirit is calm,
    No more tears or pain, I´m floating in Eden.
    I´m holding your daddy´s hands."

    We are both sitting by the Lord.
    He is with His Majesty at His Throne.
    This place is all Lights, beyond Stars.
    It´s Heaven, just like when you were born.

    I miss you, my child!!
    I´d like to wipe your tears away,
    For what we´ll see each other, one day.
    So, no more tears, I should say.

    From the daybreak of birth,
    To the frontier of death,
    You and I had the Bond of belonging.
    My child, my heart sparkles a sense of longing,
    Since the last time I saw your eyes.

    Golden songs, bright Angels play.
    The moonlight reflects upon the bay.
    The gentle breeze softly touches the trees.
    The morning dew moistens the leaves.

    The majestic views of God´s Creation
    Are all at my feet.
    I´ll be here, when you and I´d meet.
    Until then, I´ll be gone in the mist.

    My Mother´s name,
    The impeccable virtues of a living cell
    Is a mystic, potent spell,
    From which melancholy rests.

    For you is my poem, my gentle-hearted Mother,
    With your inner-being full of dreams.
    Your voice: no sound was softer, no brighter moonbeam.
    From life to colourful rainbows,
    Are gleaming in Lands to Win.

    Mom gazed idly once, waiting for me.
    Looking back, I remember with tears. You see...
    I miss her!! My poignant grief
    Reaches her deep celestial life
    Departed from affection
    In her Earthly strife.
    Her place is now an empty space
    Filled with flourishing memories of her sweet face.

    My Mother was the best collection
    Of all poems, songs and flowers.
    My words fall short for her adoration.
    She rests with Heavenly Wings and Blessings Showers.

    My Mom whispers from Heaven:
    "My child, my Spirit is calm,
    No more tears or pain, I´m floating in Eden.
    I´m holding your daddy´s hands."

    Author: Stardust. Written 2-23-2007. God´s Smiles!!...
    This Poem was written, as a TRIBUTE TO MY MOTHER WHO RESTS IN HEAVEN.
    From the frontier of Poverty into some kind of Wealth, my Mom saw it all. I had a gleam of Hope, but it vanished into thin air. I still miss and love her dearly!!
    Now, My 2 Aunts are Sick. They both suffer from Old Age Symptoms. My eldest Aunt is almost 95 years old, and her sister is 93. She suffers from severe Urinary Infections. She was taken to the Hospital this morning for Emergency Health Care. I won´t be around On Line as much, until this situation and Peace settles. I just can´t write or have any Inspirations, with my dear ones so Sick like that. My Aunts feel like their lives departure slowly from their weak, feeble bodies. God bless My 2 Aunts!! God bless you all too!! Thank you all in advance for your kind appraisals!! Send you all my loving always. HUGS. OH!! Bye the way, please, take a look at my last Poem. I call it: "My Seeds are Free, at last." I got No reviews at all. It is Good, I guess. Love. Sincerely, Starry.:wavey: :wavey:
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    Posted By stardust | Feb 24, 2007
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    A beautiful tribute to your Mother! I love reading this one.


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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Dear Benny: Thank you so much for reading my work, sweet Benny!! I was kind of sad, because nobody was reading my work. Now, I am HAPPY TO SEE YOU HERE!! So, I invite you to read a nice Poem that I wrote for my children and grandchildren. I called it: "My Seeds are Free, at last." I hope to see you there, sweetheart, making an appraisal of my work. It is in the Spiritual Poetry Forum. Then, I may continue on my way to write a little more. But, until then, my muse has No Inspirations at all. My muse is silent...Perhaps, it is a sign of sadness and depression. Who knows!!...I Pray to overcome this plight soon...I hope to see you again. I love your ways, dear Benny!! I tell you the truth. Believe me, sweetheart!! God bless you, in every step of the way!! Hugs and Love Always. Sincerely, Starry.:heart: :heart: :heart:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 4, 2007
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    Very, very touching tribute to your mother, Stardust...I am sure she IS whispering from heaven to you every day...watching and conversing with the angels to take care of you!! This was very special...

    Nomad

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    Peace Stardust,

    A beautiful and moving eulogy in praise of your mother's spirit. May The Beloved enfold her in mercy and love always.

    Abdur Rahman
    ('Servant of the Most Merciful')
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    Thank you, Nomad and Abdur for stopping by and reading my work!! Your wise appraisals are always WELCOMED!! YES!! It is indeed, a TRIBUTE TO MY DEAREST MOTHER, who rests in Heaven. I have finally written a good Poem that my mom truly deserved. Although, it is very hard for me to get INSPIRATIONS at this time. I find NO INSPIRATIONS AT ALL, nowadays. I guess, I have written my last 2 Poems for a long time. Of course, I definetely wanted to share them with all of you, here at this Forum. Now, My Muse is Silent!!...I hope, you may understand me. I am going through very rough times at this point. Sadness and much Depression have arisen into my life lately. I shall return, when Peace settles back into my life, and this situation gets under control. God bless you all!! Until then....HUGS. Sincerely, Starry.:grouphug: :asleep:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 5, 2007
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    Peace Stardust,

    Your creativity remains with you always. However, sometimes in life you need to turn that energy inwards. Once you've completed what you need to do, you'll return to sharing again and insha Allah (God willing), your inspiration will return (indeed it doesn;t actually leave)

    Abdur Rahman
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Wow - what a heartfelt tribute to your Mother! I'm sure she would love this piece Ms. Starry!
    Thought you'd like to know that this piece has been shared on Facebook over 20 times. It seems others really appreciate these sentiments as well. It may have taken a few years for me to happen by this piece and show poetic love. But the wait was well worth it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem!

    J.


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    Hi Ms. Jacquii,:giftrose:
    I am really impressed to know that my poem dedicated for my dear mom
    has been shared so many times in Facebook.
    I can't express how I feel...
    I am in awe!
    It is stunning to realize that my poetry is worthwhile.
    Can you show me who shared my poem in Facebook?
    I would like to know. Nobody asked me for permission...
    Thank you so much for letting me know, Ms. Jacquii!
    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2013 to you, Ms. Jacquii,
    and to all your loved ones!
    All the Best,
    Starry.:giftrose:


    Posted By stardust | Dec 15, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hiya Ms Starry and Merry Christmas to you as well! I hope you've been enjoying the holiday season thus far. As for who shared... You know we have social networking features enabled on JPiC -- People browsing your poem simply shared it by clicking one of the share buttons. JPiC is a publicly open forum - there's no permission required to view members' writing and/or share a link. ;)

    J.
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Oh - You can see in the JPiC Top Stats that your poem is the 5th most viewed topic on JPiC with over 14,500 views :wow:
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    JONATHAN living not existing.

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    At this part of the year it often can get lonely remembering dear ones who have departed for the afterlife and ever so often Christmas comes around with an entegral piece of our personal collage of loved ones missing and can I say anything to make it feel better ... No! However you are in our prayers and this poem is wonderfull evidence of the fact that from grief often emerges pearls of astounding wisdom and beauty.
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hello My Dear Friend, Ms. Jacquii, and all JPiC Friends,:wavey::hello:
    I am so happy to know these good news, the fact that my mother's inspirational poem
    was viewed by so many people worldwide. I am in awe beyond words!
    I am so grateful, my dear friend, Ms. Jacquii, for all you do for me, little Starry.
    Thank you, Jonathan for writing your wise reviews! I am pleased to meet you.
    Well, I take this opportunity to show my poetical love and say,
    MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU, MS. JACQUII, TO YOUR
    DEAR FAMILY, and ALL LOVED ONES!!
    MERRY CHRISTMAS & HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL FRIENDS AT JPiC FORUM FOR POETS & WRITERS!!
    HAVE A BLESSED TIME TO ONE and ALL!!
    WARM HUGS,
    POET STARRY.:giftrose: :angel:
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    Posted By stardust | Dec 24, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Totally agree. And how wonderfully worded! :yes:
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    Thank you my dear. And back at ya!
    Here's looking forward to a brilliant 2013!
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    Starry this was a beautiful Tribute to your Mom and Dad as well. I loved reading every part of it.

    Mom gazed idly once, waiting for me.
    Looking back, I remember with tears. You see...
    I miss her!! My poignant grief
    Reaches her deep celestial life
    Departed from affection
    In her Earthly strife.
    Her place is now an empty space
    Filled with flourishing memories of her sweet face.


    Such beautiful Lines.. I have never read such a poignant poem. Such a lovely tribute!


    Posted By Mysty | Jan 13, 2013
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    stardust JPiC Contributor

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    Hi Ms. Jacquii, Mysty and all JPiC Friends,:wavey:
    Thank you so much for caring to read and write your heartfelt comments in my poem
    dedicated as a tribute to my dear mother!!
    I highly appreciate your kind friendship and poetic love.
    I let you all know that I'LL SOON CHANGE MY FORMAL HOTMAIL EMAIL into ANOTHER EMAIL.
    I do NOT WANT TO LOSE YOU, MY DEAR POET FRIENDS!!
    I really wish TO REMAIN IN TOUCH WITH THIS FORUM and MY POETS FRIENDS.
    Please, read MY PRIVATE MESSAGE that I am going to send right away with MY NEW EMAIL.
    I send all my loving on your way, sweet dear friends.
    I wish to remain PART of JPiC FORUM of POETS & WRITERS.
    You can also find me in FACEBOOK, you know...
    I still keep My User Name and My Password, but the Email will change...
    Ms. Jacquii,
    Will I be able to come into this Forum anyway with a Different Email? I wonder...
    I shall be traveling to NEW YORK sometimes this year in 2013, if that is God's will.
    Please, wish me luck...
    God may bless you all, dear friends.
    STARRY.:wavey:


    Posted By stardust | Mar 18, 2013
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