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Discussion in 'Miscellaneous' started by Eric, Apr 17, 2008.



    Eric New Member

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    You
    are a
    vision

    My muse
    a painter's
    dream

    Your eyes
    if they should fall
    on me

    Would
    see
    my heart and soul

    And know
    how they beat
    and soar for you

    How I
    cherish
    the poem you are

    Your skin
    like silk

    Your eyes
    tranquil
    pools

    You inspire
    a desire in me
    to pen these words for you.

    This one is for you Flook, as promised.


    Posted By Eric | Apr 17, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Your skin
    like silk

    Your eyes
    tranquil
    pools

    Very nice...I love this really simple, straightforward admission of emotional love.

    Nomad
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    I admire how you are able to dash out poems so fast! It's something I've never been able to do. I can only write poetry (most of the time) when the muse for it hits which isn't very often. My muse is mostly in prose which I do relatively well.

    You are so prolific in verse, it tires me, like watching children dash here and there and wonder where all that energy comes from.

    I thought this was the best of the whole.

    Great work, Eric
    Gail

    Flookyyy Flookyyy

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    So sorry I haven't been on here in a while, so I haven't been able to comment :/

    But as I've said before, this is absolutely amazing Eric.. I'm so flattered.
    It's one of the nicest things anyone's ever done for me :)

    xox


    Posted By Flookyyy | May 1, 2008
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I just read this again...this time a different part stands out.

    How I
    cherish
    the poem you are


    A work of art!

    Nomad

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