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    RazorBladeConfessions Member

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    Tears flow down my eyes,
    Like water from a creek.
    She’s there,
    Right by my side.
    She calms me down,
    Only hearing her speak.
    No where to turn,
    No place to hide.

    My love grows stronger for her,
    Day after day.
    She knows my soul,
    Inside and out.
    I can sense her love back,
    Words I feel can say.
    She completes me,
    She makes me whole.

    I look at the bad times,
    The I look deep into her eyes.
    I see all the promises she has kept,
    The ones I haven’t done.
    I’m tormented by my madness,
    Word full of demise.
    She means everything to me,
    She’s my only one

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    Wind WindXSaul

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    Your only one, that's beautiful. Sad, and full of this thought that show what kind of meaning it has behind these promises


    Posted By Wind | Oct 30, 2013
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    RazorBladeConfessions Member

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    Thank you! I wrote it with all my heart to my ex gf. Things just happen for a reason.
    Glad you liked it!

    :thankyou::girlhide::girltender:

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    This was really good, very powerful. I liked the rhyme scheme and you really portrayed the emotion well. You can tell you really love the girl you are writing about. It's beautiful.


    Posted By Jearry | Nov 7, 2013
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    RazorBladeConfessions Member

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    Thank you Jearry.. Yeah I did love her or I still do. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

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