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Discussion in 'Creative Traditional' started by lanaia74, Oct 29, 2006.



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    I want to reach out from the grave to touch reality just one more time
    I am very aware of where I am and why
    Here in this house of the dead, the cobwebs and everything here is as
    silent as a mime
    I have to reach out and let others know the reason I had to die.
    I died before my time and no proof to implicate you
    So I must try and reach out to warn others of you before somebody
    else dies
    How could you be so evil to make someone die in the prime of their
    life and make others blue?
    Someone else just like me. they also would have a thousand whys.
    My awareness is very real, you stopped my physical being but not my
    spirit
    My spirit instinctively comes back to this dark damp place in hopes
    to reunite with the body that died
    So I feel it is my duty to warn others of you before you have a
    chance to hit
    Justice! I want to warn others or just have the pleasure to watch you
    die.
    You think you are so clever and will never get caught
    My physical body was so young, never to experience adult life when
    you decided it was time for me to die
    If I ever see you again, I wish to scratch your eyes out and watch
    you and laugh, as of death you are taught
    Revenge! Not a nice thing to want but it is my ultimate wish to watch
    you die.
    Keeping your identity a secret, you even come to the mausoleum so no
    one will suspect you
    You have the audacity to even put flowers at my grave
    As you stand here I start my tactics. What's happening? You haven't a
    single clue
    I must seek my revenge on you because I can even taste it because
    this I deeply crave.


    Posted By lanaia74 | Oct 29, 2006
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    Benny New Member

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    goodness....anger produces such a tidal wave of emotion! I heard every word.


    Posted By Benny | Oct 29, 2006
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