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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    This is just a collection of cinquains about things right now in my life....

    Believe-
    when all seems lost,
    when all is without hope,
    when all others give up trying;
    hang on.

    Tarnished-
    is my blind trust;
    I no longer can hope.
    My former rosy illusions
    are gone.


    Sorry-
    So much can be
    packed in so small a word.
    Yet it can also mean little.
    What's true?

    Forgive-
    easy to say,
    but always hard to do.
    It is hard to cast off the hurt,
    but try.

    Conflict-
    tears you inside
    questions pull at your mind.
    The answer is so elusive
    no peace.

    Sadness-
    the tears fall down:
    I curse its existence.
    Why does it plague my tired soul
    this way?

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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Ms Mango,

    This is an absolutely stunning collection of heartfelt, raw, and real emotion. I can relate to all the words you chose to scribe about. The poems themselves are flawless, beautifully crafted, and beautifully executed. One can "feel" the words from each Cinquain Ms Mango. Additionally it is ironic that it is like reading my life as well. If I were to quote I would quote the entire selection. The Cinquain titled "Sorry" is so true when you scribed that so much can be packed in so small a word...:wow: The Cinquain titled "Sadness" is my anthem at times. Each is so unique. I read this collection over and over, and is going in my favorites. Thank you for sharing this outstanding collection with us Ms Mango, and I hope that your life becomes rosier day by day. We feel to some degree what you feel because we all really care about each other on this site so many blessings to you Ms Mango.

    PD

    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    WOW PD :]
    Thanks so much...
    your comments always touch my heart, every time *huggles*
    It's so great that we have a family here....
    And yes, life is getting better :]
    Thanks

    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    WOW Mango these are magnificently written and so stunning you have a great talent and are a gifted writer beautifully done little one Ms Mango
    hugs kisses
    bear
    ps I hope you dont mind me calling you little one


    Posted By Bear | Nov 30, 2007
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    Hi Anna,
    These life lessons can be hard. I like that you started on a positive note as it gives the sense that that attitude will be foremost regardless.

    You have expressed yourself very well with these heartfelt poems.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Dec 2, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    Bear- I love being called little one by you :]
    *huggles*
    xD
    hehe.
    Thanks for reading :)

    Terence-THanks for the read :] I am glad you looked into it.....very much obliged :] :bows:

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    Wow...emotional work here...lots of well written works, mangopuppy! Nice read...thank you!


    Posted By Benny | Dec 22, 2007
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    mangodroplet Blue Mango Puppy :]

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    WOW!
    YOu're Here :wub:
    *huggles* :]
    I loverly you~!
    Thanks for reading, my gramppy :]

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