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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    "Mystique"

    Soothing pleasures
    Sinning taste
    Senses on the tongue,
    Subconsiously aware
    Distant sounds lingered near
    retreat into the night.

    Sensual thoughts
    Sensual gaze
    Rich moisture on the lips,
    Invite emotions awaken now
    Which once were hidden
    And peak the very soul.

    Oh welcome stanger once again
    So dark and so mystique,
    Groans of pleasure
    Sinning taste
    Delightful
    Chocolate mousse.:delicious:

    Benny New Member

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    i'm hungry now...lol. Nice write...many visions appear...subtle and smooth in your delivery. Good write!


    Posted By Benny | Nov 26, 2006
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    KingAce JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Ha...chocolate mousse, as I read I thought damn this is one hell of an exotic fruit but it's not, it's Chocolate my favorite sweet; This is a great poem becuz food gets so little recognition in poems until now....The Revolution (of Chocolate) Will be Televised!!! Sorry I loved the poem.....;Thank You


    Posted By KingAce | Dec 2, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    LOL - doth thy dare evoke the essence of dessert :p

    Hey SALLY - this poem is simply gorgeous... I dare not read into what "chocolate mousse" means to me... Just wanna simply enjoy the poem and the image this piece gives me:

    Exquisite! Perhaps a Choclate mousse is just a Chocolate mousse :p
    This poem reads very nicely - Enjoyed this one! Thanx for sharing it!

    Jacquii.

    ps - "Mystique" indeed = touche


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 2, 2006
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Dear Ms Roberts,

    This was simply a pleasure to read. Well executed, visual, and delicious!!!! AWESOME!!!!! Thanks for sharing!!

    Painted

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    Reading this has made me hungry lol, excellent write and it had a lovely flow to it. thanks for sharing. :)
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    This is one of those poems that one can read a hundred times....excellent. Ok, maybe not a hundred...lol, but I read it 4 times! Love it!!!!

    Painted ;)

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    I really dig this piece Sally..and since CHOCOLATE is my favorite its great...:yay:
    But back to the poem...I love the almost forbidden lust built up within your words...I almost felt like I was reading something I shouldn't have been reading but the way you layed it out just makes one want to break ALL of the rules only to be satisfied at the end...

    BEAUTIFUL INDEED!!!!!

    Poetic Love....
    LadyLyric


    Posted By ladylyric | Dec 4, 2006
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