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    The new arrival, glowing softly bright,
    is welcomed with a joyous revelry.
    She melts the heart with her subdued sunlight
    that shines with innocence and mystery.

    And as the days grow long this young child grows
    pubescence heralds sweet fertility
    as nature in its boundless course bestows
    upon this girl a breathtaking beauty.

    When sun and rain do woo this winsome lass,
    with warmth of motherhood then she is blest.
    But even though the days do slowly pass
    ‘tis all too soon the fledglings leave their nest.

    Dark skies descend to change this scenery;
    a cool wind blows in cruelly from the west
    yet she is dressed in her full finery
    to grace each day with beauty unsurpassed.

    But then there comes that hour of dwindling light.
    Her body succumbs to the cold and chills
    and, with the hedgerows turned to crystal white,
    she slumbers with the bears and daffodils.


    Posted By Terence | Jun 4, 2007
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    bloodletting_of_the_sky New Member

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    a soft devotional write to the beauty of life.....
    a cycle that God Himself has blessed us with...
    if only more would realize the wonderful priveledge in this responsibility...

    inspiring art you have created....
    hugs to you for such beauty and talent in your words...
    a smile you have graced me with

    peace and light to you my friend...

    phil

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    Thank you, phil, Nature is such a wonderful and inspiring subject to write about.


    Posted By Terence | Jun 5, 2007
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    Terence:

    Indeed a surreal touch of what nature is.
    I too am a nature lover, Mother Nature has the best poetry influences I've ever had.

    Excellent write. I loved it. Keep 'em coming I've enjoyed this one very much. The imagery was superb!

    Thank You
    Blessings

    Terence Member

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    Well thank you, Sally. I'm pleased that you enjoyed this, I hope I am not oversaturating by posting another one - with a slightly different aspect.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 6, 2007
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hi Terence...saturation is the name of the game here, I believe...lol!

    I really loved this poem...so beautiful ...but a little sad at the end...the path of a newborn's life through early womanhood, then on the the fall of her life and it's winter...it really sums up our lives in five short stanzas...how quickly we pass from the earth.

    Nomad

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    Thanks, Nomad, I'm glad you liked it.

    Terence


    Posted By Terence | Jun 6, 2007
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    Dear Terence,

    This was quite exquisite. I absolutely loved this poem. The picturesque scenes were outstanding, as well as your content, and the poem was beautifully executed. I am in awe of this piece, and have read this several times. Yes, nature is one of my biggest muses' and one of the most mysterious, and captivating. You have captured Nature;s essence here. Loved it!!

    Kimberly :)

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