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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Nature’s Majestic Scenery
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    High in the oak tree a majestic bald eagle sits
    Perched on the top branch, it’s eyes scanning
    Painstakingly eyeing the small crystal blue lake
    As the tangerine sun sets in the crystal blue sky
    The reflection on the clear rippling water
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    The soft sounds of crickets, tiny tree frogs and bees
    Floods the warm delicate summer breeze
    With their soothing nocturnal enchanting song
    As they hide cloaked by the living swamp
    While the aroma of an unforgiving nature
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    Overpowers the fresh fragrance of flowers,
    Ferns, and wild lemon grass
    Still an eagle whose keen eyes sees everything
    Waits patiently for the tiny creatures
    To come to the water that preserves life
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    As the sky starts to progress to a dark purple end
    An eagle with it’s dark feathers and white head
    Waltzes in the night’s warm breeze
    The dark shadow suddenly swoops downward
    As the deadly setting sun rays captures
    The shadow of the eagles nightly dinner
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    Soaring up to the treetops with it’s dinner
    The eagle’s majestic silhouette is framed
    By the setting tangerine sun


    Posted By Bear | Jun 12, 2007
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    Wow...another fantastic visual work from your pen! I love reading your 'moments' captured...feel as though I were there.


    Posted By Benny | Jun 14, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Benny and I am very happy you enjoy them
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 14, 2007
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    Beautiful poem, Bear!
    You really are a master of description!
    TY for posting this for us!
    - Tree.


    Posted By Altree94 | Jun 14, 2007
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    thank you so much my sweet Tree
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Jun 14, 2007
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    Bear:

    "Nature's Majestic Scenery"

    What a beautiful, superb poem. The title alone tells it all. Mother Nature would be proud of the way you have described her and her creatures.
    I certainly was memorized by every word in every line.
    The imagery was flawless. I had to read it many times I loved it Bear!

    Great read!!

    Blessings

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    Thank you so much Sally I am happy you enjoyed your stroll through my nature poem and thank you for this magnificent comment
    hugs kisses
    tom


    Posted By Bear | Jun 16, 2007
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