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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    The look in your eyes tells a story
    Someone you love has drifted away
    Tears falling down your cheeks
    Nowhere to go

    The sun that rises this morning
    Encompasses
    A path for you to go
    A path of love that follows
    Close
    Close behind
    You

    Never looking back
    You keep moving forward
    Forward into a paradise
    A paradise of love
    That know one has found

    This fragrance you smell
    Like no other
    Has been waiting for you

    In its heart shaped
    Rose garden
    A paradise
    That will
    Love
    You

    Arthur Henn 2007

    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    This is really beautiful and gives hope
    to those who have just had a breakup
    or love falling apart. It made me feel good inside
    so for that I thank you. Very good write :)


    Posted By Moonchild | Aug 14, 2007
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    KayaOtah happy as ever

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    This is beautiful... love the whole poem, this is to tell people to not cry over spilled milk... nice nice, bravo... *smiles*


    Posted By KayaOtah | Aug 14, 2007
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    Hey now PIM,

    Ditto, this poem does breathe of hope... Very well written and constructed...
    Your last two stanzas really top off your poem and brings it home...
    Great write...


    Posted By lasher | Aug 14, 2007
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    PoetryInMotion PoetryInMotion

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    Thank You, everyone for making me welcome here and commenting on my poems.

    Art
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    Dear Art,

    :wow: I really really tried to quote a favorite part, so I did. This was so beautiful, and exquisitely written, provides that ray of hope, and hits home I am sure to many. I loved this and also the format of the poem was just as beautifully executed as the poem itself. Another breath taking write Art. You are one to watch. An excellent rating!

    {{{~~~***PD***~~~}}}
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    PaintedDiary JPiC Mentor

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    Is it too soon to come back for a fourth read? lol, I love this poem Art....just speechless again...

    Kim

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