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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by Bear, Feb 3, 2008.



    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Night Blossoms
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    As the alabaster moonlight glances
    From between the willow branches
    As the luscious green leaves
    Sweep against the ground graceful and free
    As my love and I snuggle underneath the moonlight
    ~
    Roses of many hues flourish with an awesome beauty
    As ivy grows on delicate vines climbing the gates and walls
    Water is filtered down to a tiny pond
    As the sweet misty dew blankets the roses silky petals
    As the enchanting music of the forest mesmerizes everyone around
    ~
    Fireflies waltz in the night air like stars in the sky
    As new life whispers the ancient secrets of life
    While strolling a soft gentle breeze kisses my cheek
    And the forest spirits play hide and seek
    While a concert of birds sing in peaceful harmony
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    Nature blossoms into a majestic beauty
    This night nature whispers of her secrets and happiness
    This is where I feel content, peaceful, comforted,
    In the night the real beauty comes alive
    As the alabaster moonlight glances
    From between the willow branches


    Posted By Bear | Feb 3, 2008
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    JolieH JPiC Contributor

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    This is a beautiful poem. The garden is so alive encompassing all the senses. The colors, running water, and light give it an almost rainforest feel. I noticed such lovely internal rhyme and alliteration throughout of this poem. Great job Bear!!!!


    Posted By JolieH | Feb 3, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so very much Jolie
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 3, 2008
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    Ohh Bear....... so romantic... God you slay me hon.... such vivid imagery ........ such a romantic picture... I wanna be there....

    Beautiful write Bear.

    Love

    Mysty


    Posted By Mysty | Feb 4, 2008
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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much Mysty. So come on down and take a stroll with me we'll hold hands sit by the river chat and have a picnic when it warms up lol
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 4, 2008
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    Moonchild Moon Goddess of Whispers

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    This is a beauty.
    Very vivid images and I like how you wrapped
    up the end by repeating the beginning lines.
    You really painted a gorgeous scene with your
    words and you took me there. Very lovely!


    Posted By Moonchild | Feb 5, 2008
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    deep_poet86 Endless Rewind

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    Wow Bear this one is so beautiful. The way you described the scenery is so perfect, I wish I could see it. Thank you so much for sharing, nice poem.


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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Thank you so much moonchild for your magnificent comment and for taking time to read my works
    hugs kisses
    bear

    thank you deep poet for you great comment and for taking time to read my works
    hugs kisses
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Feb 5, 2008
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