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    lanaia74 New Member

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    I have secretly watched you grow from a child to a beautiful young woman
    I have longed for you and wanted you from the very start
    I have to convince myself is the right time to set you on the shelf of immortality, and make your existence infinite like a circular wedding band
    I love you and always have and I want to give you the gift of eternal youth, see this comes directly from my heart.

    Eternity I hand to you on a silver platter
    Never again sickness or pain, never growing old
    Do not fear me, I want to save you! From me you need not deter
    So trust me, never from me should you remain aloof.

    Everyone in your family gave me an honor by trusting me
    That opened the door so I could be close to you
    This way no one would ever suspect anything of me
    I could easily sneak you away, and then you getting away from me, my dear, your choices would be very few.

    You have grown so quickly like a fast growing climbing vine
    Your beauty, I get lightheaded, it actually takes my breath away
    So immortality must be yours, eternal youth should be yours, because you are so refined
    I gained your trust that way I wouldn't scare you away.

    I have tried to convince myself all day long what I am about to do for you is right
    I am going to take you away from this awful life of sickness and pain
    Sending you to a place that is filled with beautiful bright light
    I will release you, and you and your beauty within another domain will forever remain.

    Posted By lanaia74 | Jan 7, 2007

    Benny New Member

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    Good grief! How horrible a thought....too bad many people have them and play then out. Yes...though this is a hard one to read and fathom...too many live it out and it probably portrays the mind of one such as he.

    Posted By Benny | Jan 8, 2007

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