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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by v3sista, Jan 28, 2007.



    v3sista U Know Me

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    My Love, life is too short,
    and Yesterday is gone.
    Tomorrow may never come.
    So answer me quickly, but let it be true.
    Can I have you, Now?
    Will you Love me, Today?


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 28, 2007
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    Ha! Succinct and to the point MS V - but definitely not an all-easy question to answer. Demands a lot of truth and knowledge of self and belief in ones' self to be able to say simply ---- "Yes."

    Poem reminds me of one of my favorite songs by Zhane - the lyrics of the main chorus:
    "Love me Today......."

    Yeah - simplicity's good - I like this piece - Very nice!
    Thanx for the sharing ;)

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Jan 29, 2007
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    Hey Ms V,

    I am loving the short verse, the flow, the straight forward nature of this, and etc. Questions, yes, so hard to answer on the spot and as your demand asks.....quickly.

    Life is too short to not go for Love
    Hope yesterday was long enough to cherish it
    Will tomorrow give me another chance
    I know Now, that I Love You Today.......

    Loved this Ms V, simply lovely!!!! :bravo:

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    TY both Ladies your comments mean alot to a sista who does not put down very often.

    MS Kim- Is that piece yours? I like it too. Funny, you can say a lot with very few words, very quickly!

    V3


    Posted By v3sista | Jan 29, 2007
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