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    Wind WindXSaul

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    Not Today, Not Tomorrow, How About Yesterday?


    It says that history repeats itself,It says that unless we
    know are history we don't have a future.But i say unto
    you all what are we looking for? what are we trying to
    gain? I don't see anything more then whats in front of me
    maybe it you ...could it be me maybe there something else.
    i feel lost. In my heart where the answer lie it is empty,Maybe
    because i don't know my history?...or it that i choose not to
    look for it.What if were all fighting a losing battle that people
    from long ago did.Can't it be that this is dream to stop what
    happening.So as they say history repeats itself,They say
    unless we know are history we have no future.


    Posted By Wind | Feb 20, 2012
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Interesting take on an old cliche. Nice passage quoted above, but honestly, the grammatical and spelling errors take away from the message of your piece. It's just too distracting.

    But I've read it anyway - this could be a really special piece if it underwent a strenuous editing process. Thanks for the share just the same though ;)

    J.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Feb 20, 2012
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Hi Marcedies. This seems to be a reflective ramble one engages in while staring out to see and seeing the seemingly unending scape before us.

    Nomad :beach:
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    Wind WindXSaul

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    i thank you so very much


    Posted By Wind | Mar 8, 2012
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