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    Juzjon New Member

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    You say it so often,
    in so many ways.

    That things somehow changed,
    from those wonderful days.

    When our LOVE was so new,
    with fantastic romance.

    Filled with excitement,
    like a sensual dance.

    We gave from each other,
    all we could give.

    With hearts beating crazy,
    a thrill just to live.

    But now it is later,
    you've noticed this change.

    In the way that we are,
    in our daily arrange.

    All I can say is,
    as time marches on.

    My LOVE is much deeper,
    and so far from gone.

    Yes I've grown older,
    perhaps it's those years,

    That have slowed down my thinking,
    or so it appears.

    Yet nothing has altered,
    the way that I felt.

    From that very first kiss,
    which caused me to melt.

    My feelings are deeper,
    (let's say) much more mature.

    Although you can't see it,
    it isn't obscure.

    Yes life has been different,
    for both you and I.

    Locations have moved,
    and we both know why.

    It's not where we work
    nor where we dwell

    that distance a feeling
    or magical spell.

    Understand clear my darling,
    that I'm just here for you.

    My heart feels the same,
    as when we were new.

    There, now I've said it,
    what else can I say?

    So I wish you a heavenly,
    Valentine's Day !!!!


    Posted By Juzjon | Jun 3, 2007
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    Sally Roberts Forestdawn

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    Great rhyming.
    Great feeling.
    A wonderful Valentines Day poem for sure. Your significant other who receives such a poem like this from you would just melt into your loving arms.

    Beautifully done.

    Blessings

    Juzjon New Member

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    Sally,

    Once again I am honored you appreciate my work.


    John


    Posted By Juzjon | Jun 4, 2007
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