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    Bear JPiC Contributor

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    Oceans of dreams
    ~
    I dreamt of the Ocean Last night,
    It’s hue is that of my spirit,
    As the shimmering moonbeams glistened of the water,
    As it sent powerful waves crashing onto the cliffs.
    ~.
    She holds the sparkle of the stars captive
    Within the majestic indigo hue,
    Concealing the marvelous diamonds deep in her soul
    Adding magic to her spectacular blue
    ~.
    The ocean whispered to me,
    Her cool breath gently caressed my skin.
    And her mysterious spirit began to tempt me,
    With stories of storms, beauty and enraged fury,
    ~
    Last night I went to her shores,
    And cuddled in her calm cool arms,
    To be engulfed within her beauty,
    As I was mesmerized be her charisma,
    ~
    She held me tight and caressed me,
    With waves of her blue velvet ,
    And I surrendered myself to her,
    Always knowing that’s what I'd do.
    ~
    I dreamt of the ocean last night
    The velvet indigo is the color of our souls.
    Watching the sunrise as one.


    Posted By Bear | Mar 22, 2007
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    I especially lik ethis line of yours
    The velvet indigo is the color of our souls
    lines like that are perfect to my taste,
    what a sultry, brilliant write

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    Erikestabrooks

    Thank you so much for your great comment
    handshakes
    bear


    Posted By Bear | Mar 22, 2007
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