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Discussion in 'Emotional Romantic' started by athlone, Dec 5, 2006.



    athlone www.poetrypages4u.com

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    Ode To Passion

    Such passion lies between soft thighs
    of beauty’s earthly form.
    Her blossomed lips and sculpted hips
    my hungry eyes adorn.
    For sweet caress of rose-bud breast
    O I would gladly die,
    to be reborn in misted dawn
    with love’s departing sigh.


    Posted By athlone | Dec 5, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hey ATHLONE!

    1. Welcome to the Community - if you so desire, please introduce yourself via the Member Introductions section.

    2. I AM LOVING THIS POEM - such exquisite intimacy. Lust? Possibly. Lewd? NEVER. Love? Such a broad definition of that word - I dare not answer LOL - But truly:

    Seems you've sculped your poem to perfection. Makes my hungry eyes THIRST... Very nice 1st piece to share with the Community!

    I enjoyed this one very much!
    Thanx,

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 5, 2006
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    nomadicrhymer JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    Awesome....lovin it!

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    Great imagery...kept me drinking each word and vision in deeply. That's what a poem is supposed to do and I love this one.


    Posted By Benny | Dec 6, 2006
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    Posted By athlone | Dec 7, 2006
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