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    Soul Illoquent New Member

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    envision a world
    in full color, surround sound
    perpetual beauty
    natural harmony

    envision a life of
    unbroken ties
    crystal clear eyes
    neverending emotional highs

    envision interaction
    on even playing fields
    where skin tone is a highlight on backdrops of
    characters' quality
    and quality character

    envision a system
    justice without law
    peace without war
    wealth without hording
    health and care with no deductible

    envision pure art
    expression of the world envisioned
    tolerance unnecessary where crudity, nudity, and propaganda are naught
    a painless mural
    a portrait of perfection so commonly sought


    we deny ourselves the luxury of this vantage
    exchanging the point for the dull summit of commercial icebergs
    and decadent self deceit

    pandering to our own internal anarchy
    struggling against good judgement
    in the name of all that seems reasonable or feels good right now
    and bowing low to honor a murarium of rodent kings

    what will come of you, great Hamster Cage?
    will you erect your neon pink tunnel into the heavens,
    and from such great heights peer down to perceive the entire world?

    at best, you will see half the sphere,
    limited to view through the hue of your
    cedar lined confinement.

    the slightest whisper of the wind will echo in your tiny ears
    the sound of plastic creaking, cracking,
    splitting, splintering, shattering
    flailing, failing and

    like a confetti concert in the key of
    genius awry

    as the ground approaches,
    the songs are heard clearly,
    the colors seen vividly,
    and nature's course comes to an abrupt...

    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    No ones jumped on this one yet thats odd to me,

    some very good ideas, alll intricate and brought out well

    Jer4clarity Lover of Meanings

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    Mr. Illoquent,

    This is indeed ripe for the picking. Those who would taste the meaning of the penmanship would find their minds filled with its truth.



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