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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    day fades rapidly

    as approaching night falls on

    Ohio river

    casting vast shadows over

    shimmering rippling waters.


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 30, 2006
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    Totally AWESOME!


    Posted By lanaia74 | Nov 30, 2006
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    erikestabrook JPiC Premium VIP Member

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    this one seemed more attuned to the form,
    and also was very alluring

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hi Lanaia :wavey:

    :word_thankyou: for the nice comments


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 30, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    :word_hello: erikestabrook

    :word_thankyou: for the read and comments


    Posted By Echoes | Nov 30, 2006
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    excellent form, Lisa :bravo:

    very visually presented, a very enjoyable read :)


    Posted By Harry | Dec 1, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    thanks Harry:huggles:

    I always appreciate your input :yay:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 1, 2006
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    you're welcome, it is my pleasure to read you :bowing:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 2, 2006
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    MsJacquiiC Poetica Magnifique

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    Hi ECHOES - it's very seldom that one can simply sit and enjoy a poem for it's beautiful form alone. You've done this with you tanka. Nothing to read into this one - except for the vision of being on the river. Oh! - Have I fond memories of being on the water.

    Beautifully written piece of poetry ECHOES - Enjoyed this one immensely!
    Thanx for sharing it with us.

    Jacquii.


    Posted By MsJacquiiC | Dec 2, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hello Jacquii,:wavey:

    :word_thankyou:

    I deeply appreciate and treasure your wonderful comments about my poem:friends:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 3, 2006
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    Lisa, had a thought about your first line

    perhaps dusk fades rapidly

    just seems to me day would have long been gone before nightfall:wink2:


    Posted By Harry | Dec 5, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hi Harry:wavey:

    yeah I was thinking about that the other day, nice suggestion:bravo:

    :word_thankyou:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 5, 2006
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    Good form on this write!


    Posted By Storytime | Dec 6, 2006
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    Simple and visual read...ain't that what good poetry is about? Yeah...it is! Great soft write! Stop that jumping...I cannot concentrate! LOL


    Posted By Benny | Dec 6, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    :word_thankyou: storytime


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 6, 2006
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    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    :word_thankyou: Benny

    :ok: I'll stop bouncing around:harhar:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 6, 2006
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    You said quite alot in such few lines. When one can read only these lines yet come away with a picture of night falling, standing by the river bank and seeing the sparkle of moonlight, or even other lights on the water, that's truly a talent, and you have it!

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    Hi Sheri:wavey:

    :word_thankyou: for your very kind remarks about my poem and my talent:yay:

    I deepy appreciate the read:friends:


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 7, 2006
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    tight- think i'm now inspired to canvas a few ku's myself. nice-

    Echoes Poetic Princess

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    hi Ariono:wavey:

    :word_thankyou: for the read and nice comment


    Posted By Echoes | Dec 24, 2006
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